Lady-RuffDiamond
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http://www.bbc.co.uk/newsbeat/artic...iends-apology-letter-and-sends-it-back-to-her
Man marks his ex-girlfriend's apology letter and sends it back to her
FROM THE TOPICYOU WHAT?
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Man marks his ex-girlfriend's apology letter and sends it back to her
FROM THE TOPICYOU WHAT?
3h
3 hours ago
- When your ex writes you an apology letter so you grade it to send it back
6:05 PM - 17 Feb 2017
He starts off his letter by saying the introduction is too long and there's lots of repetition.
Nick says his ex needs to show reasoning when saying she ended up failing to keep the relationship working.
He also says she needs to back her claims up with proof, like saying she never cheated on him.
The second page calls for his ex-girlfriend to provide more details after this line: "I took all the promises we had and broke them."
Then there's a spelling mistake with "loose" changed to "lose".
Nick then calls his ex out when she says she has "no reason to hide, lie or hold anything back" from him.
He writes in the margin: "If there is no reason to lie, why isn't the truth being told?"
He says he hasn't thought about her when she asks if he has and again accuses her of "using useless fillers" to pad out her letter.
Nick even says she used "lackadaisical" handwriting near the end of her note.
The final page contains a question mark after "I love you" and also the rest of Nick's final conclusion.
"If you want to be believed, back it up with proof," he writes.
"You claimed that cheating never occurred, but place blame on yourself - then what for?
"Need to stop contradicting your own story and pick a side. While this gesture is appreciated, I would prefer details over statements.
"Revision for half credit will be accepted."
Other people pointed out other mistakes in the letter.
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Dr Petty Spaghetti @waywardpug
@NickLutz12 @fillegrossiere ok should have failed her. You missed that she listed "a lot" as one word in her intro.
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Rachel Green @katiemoe_
@NickLutz12 misspelled that so I say they should get a 58
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kae. @TheKaelye
@NickLutz12 there were quite a few missing apostrophes in contractions, if you wanna count off points for that too
After posting the note on Twitter, Nick was asked out on a date.
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Fresh Face Splendor @caitlincorsetti
.@NickLutz12 I think you're a little young for me, but this makes me want to date — not cheat on — you.
Nick also told another Twitter user that his ex-girlfriend had seen the changes and was "okay with her grade".