Sooo let's try this again :)

[theEclectanista]

After receiving an overwhelming response from the Giving Men Power post, I decided to do another video.

This is a rough draft & is unlisted (only the ppl with this link can view it)

PLEASE ignored my hair.. my scalp was freshly saturated with my Mega-tek/JBCO mix & the humidity from outside was not being my friend today

this video is about giving second chances...

feedback is needed & appreciated
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cx08YUiydfE

 

[Shinka]

I think you offered sound advice and a logical step by step process on how your made your decision in this relationship matter.

I just have a question...I read the last thread and I was just curious. When you say young women..what age are you aiming for. I know I'm like 2 years over the young adult limit (26), but I didn't find the video appealing simply based on the delivery and presentation. However, I don't do well with youtube advice videos so that just may be my bias.

It was hard for me to focus on you and your advice. I think you should try to look at the camera as if you were talking to a person. Your eyes shifting to the corners was distracting. I don't know how old you are, but I just viewed the video as a teenager giving relationship advice. You maybe be older than that, but you look very young. I, as a 26 year old, wouldn't watch your video. Your videos may be suited for the late teens...maybe early college crowd.

 

[theEclectanista]

I am 22. So, people in my age group are the aim