I liked the video!
You have good on-screen presence.
I was going to suggest that the intro be tightened up for future vids, as it seemed a little long, but I watched it again and it's fine.
I like the concept of the style that you were going for and I like that "no pick was needed" for but the result seemed a little off. Perhaps you can experiment with different techniques to achieve the fluffy fro (along the lines of simjam's suggestion or even a twisted bantu-knotted curly fro?) and redo the video? [/constructive criticism]
Otherwise, good narration/instruction, music and editing. I like that you included stills of the finished style and that you obviously put thought and creativity into the pics!
You have beautiful hair and I'm definitely looking forward to more of your videos!